Horizons Are Never Far

There's a few things that need fixing...

-You don't have a thread description. The description should look like this: Character First and Last - Age in numbers - Occupation

-None of the birth dates you have match. Under his age, it says that he's 21, but under his birthday it says he was born in 1846. THEN, under the about section, you say that he was born in 1844. You'll need to change his age to match his birth year and you'll have to change one of the years to match the other. You should, however, mention how old he was when he was changed in his about section.

-You can't italicize anything within the profile or make it bold. Where you have "Personality." you're better off just leaving it as is or putting it in all caps if you want it to stand out.