Hey there! Just a few things need to be fixed in order for her to be accepted. After this, you should be good to go.
-You need a character image. Said image needs to be 600 by 350 pixels and the url can be entered via your edit profile page, under the personal tab. There should be a spot that says "Character Image 600px by 350px." That's where you need to paste the link.
-Your avatar isn't showing. I tried viewing your image in another page, but it looks like you entered an invalid URL. When entering your icon URL, make sure you're linking directly to the image. Remember, icons need to be 250x350px!
-You have down two different years for her birthday. Under her basic info, it says that she was born in 1980. In her history, you have 1987. Since 1980 is the one that's consistent with her age, you should probably edit the other.